hey it’s evan and today i’m doing
another one of my Fiverr gigs i am
reviewing a website from jean underwood
and his website is SCT power dot us so
we’re going to check that out I don’t
know if I’ve done a dot us website
review before so this might be a first
should be fun so here we go SCT power
sliding cord engine next generation of
clean-burning fuel efficient compact
engine design so my first thought
initially is I’m not exactly sure what
this is about so it’s an engine leading
with the picture of the engine doesn’t
mean much to me right so we want to lead
here with the benefits like why is this
such a great new engine this may be to a
highly technical person so it depends on
the audience to highly technical persons
might make sense but to me I don’t know
you know what’s going on here why this
is better than other engines and so
again when you’re making that this is a
common issue for a lot of people making
a presentation you focus on the
technical details and not the benefits
right so before I even care about what
this thing looks like and this may be
the greatest invention in the world I
have no idea before you tell me about
the invention and how it works tell me
what it does all right tell me the
benefits of what it’s all about and
that’ll get me asking well how does it
work why is it different right when you
lead with this it makes it more
confusing so some of the elements are
here it’s just this should be lower down
on the page or in a different page let’s
scroll down and see welcome excited to
announce the formation of the company
promote the next generation of engine
design simple efficient compact design
of this engine potential applications as
many industries our business plan design
and build the engine target small
industrial off-road vehicle markets
seeking qualified investors a
first-round funding develop and
prototype the engine use a contact us
page to be part of it okay so this is
target investors and again investors I
used to be in the investment business
venture capital raising half a million
to 15 million dollars for companies
this is not the way we want to start off
talk about the benefits and then this
shouldn’t even be on the homepage I
don’t care about what your engine looks
like until I know that is going to
change the world so it hit me high level
first so these are better compact simple
design clean-burning modular
fuel-efficient each engine block
pictured in the video but Bob up so like
this doesn’t matter right again too
technical this is what I’m more
concerned about the simple design of the
engine will do some Annja fracturing
costs as well as provide extended life
of the engine over current engine design
this is awesome how much so how much
does it reduce the cost of manufacturing
the engine and how much does it provide
extended life you’re making bold claims
here I want some numbers and some data
to back it up this I don’t care about
the technical how from an investor point
of view doesn’t matter it’s going to get
into the due diligence as investors look
at it they may hire their technical guys
to comb through it this is what they’re
going to care about but investors don’t
care about this they care about this and
give me more data as to why
clean-burning unlike previous row
designs a unique shape of the piston
affords a hundred percent seal as
opinion piston rotates in the block so I
know what that means and I don’t know
how that means that it’s clean burning I
maybe I’m I’m ignorant but you mean
you’re going to get that with investors
right investors are not going to be
super knowledgeable about your product
so I kind of understand what
clean-burning means but I don’t
understand this so again take out the
technical stuff I don’t care about the
shape of the Pistons I don’t know what
this this hundred percent seal means
talk to me how its clean burning and
what the benefits are modular engine
block Moll jurors are designed to be
stacked and made it to a to each other
up to the shear strength of the power
shop again too technical doesn’t make
sense to me with to ignition cycles per
block per revolution the power derived
from this design is twice that of an
equivalent displacement engine I know
the displacement engine is but twice the
power of a normal engine that’s great
again this is what we focus on not the
rest of it
and I don’t know if modular is the
benefit it’s more power and then fuel
efficient by using electronic friction
plates between stock and engine blocks
again does not help me at all this gives
the power benefits of a large
displacement engine with the fuel
efficient benefits of a small despues
engine ok so again this is more helpful
than the first part so for all of you
who are trying to build a website and
trying to peel the presentation document
to go after investors again what we want
to know is what the heck does your
invention or your product or service do
what are the main benefits why do I care
about this I don’t care about the
technical details yet tell me why this
is an important invention and then let
me dig into the details if I’m curious
ok so that’s what this website it’s a
good start it’s a good start just
changing awarding around and adding more
the benefits in will help I definitely
take this off powered by website builder
Go Daddy patent pending that’s great so
usually when you’re looking at a an
investment document the first thing to
look at is the executive summary so we
don’t really have an executive somewhere
here maybe you want people to use a
contact to find out more about it but
give me a higher level overview of what
you’re trying to do like the size of the
market your your plan just an overview
something that if you know your
competition reads that’s not the end of
the world but I need to be sold in the
executive summary before I want to take
the next step beyond that when investing
to look at as a team so let’s see the
about us mission statement create a
deeper create a cleaner planet one
engine at a time ok about the owner my
name is Jean grew up watching my father
create an oil industry service company
based on adventures he created so I like
the personal story I might you know have
a picture of your dad and or you on your
dad big blocks attacks make it a little
bit hard to read so chunk that up a
little bit and two or three paragraphs I
have a degree in computer science and I
have been working the IT industry for
the last 20 years so this is something
that’s going to cause me some concern if
I’m going to
investor maybe what you’re really
looking for is not just money but you
need somebody to run this company and
the biggest concern I would have is one
does this thing work right so it’s great
to have a patent it’s great to claim
that at work is great to say that it’s
twice the power of a regular engine but
give me some proof show me studies that
you’ve done show me case studies show me
testimonials show me somebody with
credibility saying that this thing works
because you know I believe that I
believe that this works the challenges
investors are pitched all the time with
people who say they have the next
greatest thing and it doesn’t work so
this is what you’re being loved into
that’s the problem so you need to show
that it is working that there is
momentum so give me some credibility and
maybe already have it it’s just not
being shown on here my next concern
after that is you have a background in
computer science and I’m in the IT
industry for the last 20 years you know
what do you know about engines and what
is your experience in building a
business that’s going to be my issue so
if I’m going to invest or I give you I
don’t know what you need I know what
you’re asking for give you half a
million dollars to launch this business
if you’ve never run a company before and
you don’t have experience in building
engines then that’s going to be a
problem right that’s going to be an
issue of why would I give you this money
so what I’d suggest for you is to build
a team up around you right somebody who
has more business experience who’s gonna
run this company it gives me a little
more you reduce my risk right you’re
reducing my risk a lot so even if I like
the idea if i buy that this thing works
i buy your credibility statements from
your testimonials in case studies i buy
all that I’m worried who’s going to
actually run this company and can you be
a CEO or not target market potential
markets can I click through on these so
let’s clip you see an airplane this is
just a plain so okay I mean I guess I
got a general sense of what you’re doing
here but I don’t know the size of these
markets and it’s kind of locking in
details I get that you want people to
contact you to learn more but
I don’t know if there’s enough on this
yet to make an investor want to contact
you contact us page save a tree is this
forum it’s good some social media
channels let’s see what’s happening here
and I think I thought I saw some news at
the front there yeah you have some news
here so you launch a crowdsourcing
campaign contribute like this out
fundraiser calm practical solution would
do co2 emissions so already this is a
better start than what you have on your
homepage new and new concept engine
design into reality reduce co2 emissions
by up fifty percent over current engine
design so that’s great right this is
great I don’t remember seeing that on
your original page but again you got to
back that up right it should reduce
people throw out tons of claims why is
this actually going to work you see a
picture this is great I mean this is
missing from your initial page I don’t
know anything about you from your home
page again I try to have maybe something
about you with the engine or you with
showing some kind of you know mechanical
engineering background something so a
lot of the same information hear your
story all that stuff okay Twitter so I
mean it kind of looks like you just
threw up a Twitter page you have a
Twitter page you got some tweets going
up trying to promote the social media
campaign Facebook page nothing really
happening there i mean it’s a way for
people to reach you if they want that’s
fine you know you know pushing it too
much but again going back to this page
okay this is this is what we’re the
point of the review and this is what you
want to get going to summarize you need
to first show me why this is important
okay don’t get into technical details
show me why it’s important tell me about
what you’re trying to build why this is
super important then get into the
benefits right tell me why this is going
to happen that the the main things that
by using this engine the world would be
a better place right you’ve started
going on through it here
with these take out the technical stuff
people don’t care about it yet I know
you think this is this is this is the
core this is what it is this is why it’s
so important but I’m telling you
investors don’t care about this stuff
yet they need to understand the benefits
first before the hop okay back this up
how’s it hundred percent seal doubles
the power of an engine whenever that was
extends the life of an engine back that
up can’t just throw it a claim you have
to back it up with some data to show me
why this is going to happen and some
testimonials okay then a little bit more
about your plan what you’re you know
path to market is who is on your team if
it’s somebody besides you build up your
credibility a little bit more and then
you can have a page it shows a little
bit about the patent and all that stuff
I’m excited by this it sounds like a
promising new technology and I hope that
you can leverage some of what I’ve
suggested here to build a more powerful
presentation because it’s it’s a shame
there’s so many great inventions out
there that can really change the world
that just that just died on the
inventors table because they didn’t do a
good job in getting the word out and
promoting themselves properly and I get
that you know you’re a technical person
and maybe not a marketer and maybe that
means trying to get somebody on board
who believes in what you’re doing and
who has marketing skills to help you
build this thing up but I’m excited with
this let me know how it goes i’m not a
huge engine person but if this will help
you know make the world a better place
and provide jobs for people as well then
I’m all for so for those of you who want
to check it out you can go to what is it
SCT power us if you guys like this video
give it a thumbs up below you have some
comments as well leave it in the comment
section i’ll be reading those afterwards
and you can click on my face there at
the top right of the video to subscribe
to the channel thank you guys so much
and I’ll see you soon
you
another one of my Fiverr gigs i am
reviewing a website from jean underwood
and his website is SCT power dot us so
we’re going to check that out I don’t
know if I’ve done a dot us website
review before so this might be a first
should be fun so here we go SCT power
sliding cord engine next generation of
clean-burning fuel efficient compact
engine design so my first thought
initially is I’m not exactly sure what
this is about so it’s an engine leading
with the picture of the engine doesn’t
mean much to me right so we want to lead
here with the benefits like why is this
such a great new engine this may be to a
highly technical person so it depends on
the audience to highly technical persons
might make sense but to me I don’t know
you know what’s going on here why this
is better than other engines and so
again when you’re making that this is a
common issue for a lot of people making
a presentation you focus on the
technical details and not the benefits
right so before I even care about what
this thing looks like and this may be
the greatest invention in the world I
have no idea before you tell me about
the invention and how it works tell me
what it does all right tell me the
benefits of what it’s all about and
that’ll get me asking well how does it
work why is it different right when you
lead with this it makes it more
confusing so some of the elements are
here it’s just this should be lower down
on the page or in a different page let’s
scroll down and see welcome excited to
announce the formation of the company
promote the next generation of engine
design simple efficient compact design
of this engine potential applications as
many industries our business plan design
and build the engine target small
industrial off-road vehicle markets
seeking qualified investors a
first-round funding develop and
prototype the engine use a contact us
page to be part of it okay so this is
target investors and again investors I
used to be in the investment business
venture capital raising half a million
to 15 million dollars for companies
this is not the way we want to start off
talk about the benefits and then this
shouldn’t even be on the homepage I
don’t care about what your engine looks
like until I know that is going to
change the world so it hit me high level
first so these are better compact simple
design clean-burning modular
fuel-efficient each engine block
pictured in the video but Bob up so like
this doesn’t matter right again too
technical this is what I’m more
concerned about the simple design of the
engine will do some Annja fracturing
costs as well as provide extended life
of the engine over current engine design
this is awesome how much so how much
does it reduce the cost of manufacturing
the engine and how much does it provide
extended life you’re making bold claims
here I want some numbers and some data
to back it up this I don’t care about
the technical how from an investor point
of view doesn’t matter it’s going to get
into the due diligence as investors look
at it they may hire their technical guys
to comb through it this is what they’re
going to care about but investors don’t
care about this they care about this and
give me more data as to why
clean-burning unlike previous row
designs a unique shape of the piston
affords a hundred percent seal as
opinion piston rotates in the block so I
know what that means and I don’t know
how that means that it’s clean burning I
maybe I’m I’m ignorant but you mean
you’re going to get that with investors
right investors are not going to be
super knowledgeable about your product
so I kind of understand what
clean-burning means but I don’t
understand this so again take out the
technical stuff I don’t care about the
shape of the Pistons I don’t know what
this this hundred percent seal means
talk to me how its clean burning and
what the benefits are modular engine
block Moll jurors are designed to be
stacked and made it to a to each other
up to the shear strength of the power
shop again too technical doesn’t make
sense to me with to ignition cycles per
block per revolution the power derived
from this design is twice that of an
equivalent displacement engine I know
the displacement engine is but twice the
power of a normal engine that’s great
again this is what we focus on not the
rest of it
and I don’t know if modular is the
benefit it’s more power and then fuel
efficient by using electronic friction
plates between stock and engine blocks
again does not help me at all this gives
the power benefits of a large
displacement engine with the fuel
efficient benefits of a small despues
engine ok so again this is more helpful
than the first part so for all of you
who are trying to build a website and
trying to peel the presentation document
to go after investors again what we want
to know is what the heck does your
invention or your product or service do
what are the main benefits why do I care
about this I don’t care about the
technical details yet tell me why this
is an important invention and then let
me dig into the details if I’m curious
ok so that’s what this website it’s a
good start it’s a good start just
changing awarding around and adding more
the benefits in will help I definitely
take this off powered by website builder
Go Daddy patent pending that’s great so
usually when you’re looking at a an
investment document the first thing to
look at is the executive summary so we
don’t really have an executive somewhere
here maybe you want people to use a
contact to find out more about it but
give me a higher level overview of what
you’re trying to do like the size of the
market your your plan just an overview
something that if you know your
competition reads that’s not the end of
the world but I need to be sold in the
executive summary before I want to take
the next step beyond that when investing
to look at as a team so let’s see the
about us mission statement create a
deeper create a cleaner planet one
engine at a time ok about the owner my
name is Jean grew up watching my father
create an oil industry service company
based on adventures he created so I like
the personal story I might you know have
a picture of your dad and or you on your
dad big blocks attacks make it a little
bit hard to read so chunk that up a
little bit and two or three paragraphs I
have a degree in computer science and I
have been working the IT industry for
the last 20 years so this is something
that’s going to cause me some concern if
I’m going to
investor maybe what you’re really
looking for is not just money but you
need somebody to run this company and
the biggest concern I would have is one
does this thing work right so it’s great
to have a patent it’s great to claim
that at work is great to say that it’s
twice the power of a regular engine but
give me some proof show me studies that
you’ve done show me case studies show me
testimonials show me somebody with
credibility saying that this thing works
because you know I believe that I
believe that this works the challenges
investors are pitched all the time with
people who say they have the next
greatest thing and it doesn’t work so
this is what you’re being loved into
that’s the problem so you need to show
that it is working that there is
momentum so give me some credibility and
maybe already have it it’s just not
being shown on here my next concern
after that is you have a background in
computer science and I’m in the IT
industry for the last 20 years you know
what do you know about engines and what
is your experience in building a
business that’s going to be my issue so
if I’m going to invest or I give you I
don’t know what you need I know what
you’re asking for give you half a
million dollars to launch this business
if you’ve never run a company before and
you don’t have experience in building
engines then that’s going to be a
problem right that’s going to be an
issue of why would I give you this money
so what I’d suggest for you is to build
a team up around you right somebody who
has more business experience who’s gonna
run this company it gives me a little
more you reduce my risk right you’re
reducing my risk a lot so even if I like
the idea if i buy that this thing works
i buy your credibility statements from
your testimonials in case studies i buy
all that I’m worried who’s going to
actually run this company and can you be
a CEO or not target market potential
markets can I click through on these so
let’s clip you see an airplane this is
just a plain so okay I mean I guess I
got a general sense of what you’re doing
here but I don’t know the size of these
markets and it’s kind of locking in
details I get that you want people to
contact you to learn more but
I don’t know if there’s enough on this
yet to make an investor want to contact
you contact us page save a tree is this
forum it’s good some social media
channels let’s see what’s happening here
and I think I thought I saw some news at
the front there yeah you have some news
here so you launch a crowdsourcing
campaign contribute like this out
fundraiser calm practical solution would
do co2 emissions so already this is a
better start than what you have on your
homepage new and new concept engine
design into reality reduce co2 emissions
by up fifty percent over current engine
design so that’s great right this is
great I don’t remember seeing that on
your original page but again you got to
back that up right it should reduce
people throw out tons of claims why is
this actually going to work you see a
picture this is great I mean this is
missing from your initial page I don’t
know anything about you from your home
page again I try to have maybe something
about you with the engine or you with
showing some kind of you know mechanical
engineering background something so a
lot of the same information hear your
story all that stuff okay Twitter so I
mean it kind of looks like you just
threw up a Twitter page you have a
Twitter page you got some tweets going
up trying to promote the social media
campaign Facebook page nothing really
happening there i mean it’s a way for
people to reach you if they want that’s
fine you know you know pushing it too
much but again going back to this page
okay this is this is what we’re the
point of the review and this is what you
want to get going to summarize you need
to first show me why this is important
okay don’t get into technical details
show me why it’s important tell me about
what you’re trying to build why this is
super important then get into the
benefits right tell me why this is going
to happen that the the main things that
by using this engine the world would be
a better place right you’ve started
going on through it here
with these take out the technical stuff
people don’t care about it yet I know
you think this is this is this is the
core this is what it is this is why it’s
so important but I’m telling you
investors don’t care about this stuff
yet they need to understand the benefits
first before the hop okay back this up
how’s it hundred percent seal doubles
the power of an engine whenever that was
extends the life of an engine back that
up can’t just throw it a claim you have
to back it up with some data to show me
why this is going to happen and some
testimonials okay then a little bit more
about your plan what you’re you know
path to market is who is on your team if
it’s somebody besides you build up your
credibility a little bit more and then
you can have a page it shows a little
bit about the patent and all that stuff
I’m excited by this it sounds like a
promising new technology and I hope that
you can leverage some of what I’ve
suggested here to build a more powerful
presentation because it’s it’s a shame
there’s so many great inventions out
there that can really change the world
that just that just died on the
inventors table because they didn’t do a
good job in getting the word out and
promoting themselves properly and I get
that you know you’re a technical person
and maybe not a marketer and maybe that
means trying to get somebody on board
who believes in what you’re doing and
who has marketing skills to help you
build this thing up but I’m excited with
this let me know how it goes i’m not a
huge engine person but if this will help
you know make the world a better place
and provide jobs for people as well then
I’m all for so for those of you who want
to check it out you can go to what is it
SCT power us if you guys like this video
give it a thumbs up below you have some
comments as well leave it in the comment
section i’ll be reading those afterwards
and you can click on my face there at
the top right of the video to subscribe
to the channel thank you guys so much
and I’ll see you soon
you
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