hey 7 and today I’m doing another review
from my fiverr gig where I look at a
website give some feedback today I’ve
got eight days up to do this I’m going
to do one for Clinton who’s got a
website called i TI de group com let’s
check it out see what it’s about and see
what can advice we can give so here’s
the website now I don’t know anything
about this going in just checking it out
my first thoughts are it looks clean it
looks pretty professional I’m looking at
the top here and you know I had an issue
just saying with the names of IT I de
group with I tied group I would split
this logo up a little bit I’m just
looking at kind of layout now let’s put
that logo up just easier to read I don’t
get the picture why we like this is this
is in your top that’s that’s huge space
right there and then it’s on the
watermark of your picture I definitely
swap that out and doesn’t look very
professional but the layout looks pretty
clean pretty easy to read so what is
this a website all about learn and earn
trade currency online so the picture
doesn’t do anything for me in terms of
learning about currency but let’s see
what’s this about welcome to aight aight
goop oh he’s so much easier right here
with the tide so the little I the
capital T capital G so much easier to
read them than this I tight as a service
provider emphasis on wealth creation to
invest in the foreign exchange market
forex we pride ourselves and helping
people achieve financial success through
trading so it goes on FX open aight
aight difference quote though no one can
go back and make a brand new start
anyone can start from now and make a
brand new ending that’s pretty good i
like that quote successful Carl’s action
three steps help you achieve your
financial goals partner with us today
and then web posting by so you’re asking
people to make a pretty important
decision right so there’s tons of forex
websites out there there’s tons of
different markets that go after why
should they choose you everybody else
now this this looks professional ish
again to make this better I
clean it up like this has to go unless
they’re paying you something but even
you know you don’t want that to be on
there and that that makes it look a
mature and again this at the top and the
captioning and even this picture what’s
missing here from either on a bigger
scale is who are you guys right like why
should I go with you over everybody else
give me something that shows the founder
right so who is this person in Clinton
Clinton where are you Clinton I want to
see your face I want to see the results
you’ve gotten I want to see testimonials
some people have gone through your
system and it’s worked that’s what I
want to see on here make me make me feel
like you are the right company to work
with like if I go with Clinton he’s the
man right i don’t get that here this is
that this is better than some pages out
there but it’s it’s a lot worse than
other pages and so you’re in a super
competitive market you have to do
something to stand out so overall that’s
that’s my first stomach I would not fill
this out yet because I don’t see any
social proof i don’t see people having
results from it and i don’t know about
who Clinton is and why she signed up for
this so right like so read this you know
ok the I tied group difference
everything you say here is something
that every other four arcs website is
going to talk about we’ve spent a lot of
time developing this material provide as
much value as possible and although it’s
only to put an iceberg right everybody
talks about this everybody so you need
to do something to stand out and the way
you do that is through your story
Clinton why did you start this what got
you into forex why is it working for you
and what pain did you see in the market
when you went out and created this
website there’s a reason for it right
why why do you want to educate people so
badly that’s that’s why I has to come
out that’s how people are going to come
and sign up with you over everybody else
because all the other guys are seeing
exactly the same thing so you can make
it look more professional a little bit
again it’s an okay job but still you’re
going to have a hard time I’m better not
a lot of people are filling this out yet
because you have to tell your store and
make me feel something about your brand
so those are my quick thoughts in a home
page it’s like a little bit what else we
have here we
got a Twitter page will load that up
we’ve got the fax starting training our
strategy so there’s nothing about us
which I would love to see I always look
to see who the person is and see a nice
smiling picture Clinton in his success
so here’s their twitter page so I guess
it’s pretty new you know only 41 tweets
but what I do like is it is being
updated right sometimes they go to
Twitter pages nothing there so at least
has been updated 21 hours ago we’re
posting some quotes some more buffets so
it’s on trend I’d love to see your face
here man you know make it’s called
Clinton be if that’s your last name be
you know have half your face make me
feel something you know people love
connecting with people that they see
your face and smiling and thats
everywhere that’s a part of the bread
people going to sign up right look
Warren Buffett it’s an individual people
love connecting with people to switch
this around I love that you’re writing
to people i know this conversation is
all about well it’s back and forth back
and forth it’s great like this is
awesome providing supports this guy’s
paul have some questions no clinton’s
responding this is great right so
imagine a Paul could interact with the
face here so you’re doing the right
thing so far our Twitter’s is great
you’re responding people you’re posting
quotes and some interesting information
look at all these at responses this is
great so back to the website these are
the three pages the fact start trading
our strategy again I change all of this
out take this off change the picture get
rid of this thing it doesn’t relate to
what you’re talking about here the font
is nice though the contents nice the
layout looks good you ask them some
questions again this could be so much
better if you made this personal so okay
let’s see what is forex Oh ideally this
is a link where take me right down to it
but let’s go to what is forex so for
example that this is you know these
questions again it’s going to be from
every single person who has a for art’s
website night what is forex what is a
pip what are the seven most commonly
traded currencies so I mean I can find
this everywhere
what’s going to make the big difference
is your take on it right how to trade
foreign exchange over the internet so so
you’re talking about metatrader4 I don’t
know anything anything about this right
meditative for FX open tell me why you
love this why is meta treated for the
best thing ever why is FX open your
favorite tool to use right tell me your
stories say tell me about the the other
forex systems reviews that sucked and
how cumbersome they were an expensive
and terrible service or whatever the
points are and say why you love working
with this because this is just Fox and
I’m getting lost in it it’s not making
me feel anything where if you came up
until I told your store and told me why
you picked metatrader4 why this is
important that I should care about it
then I’m going to be more interested and
that personal connection is going to
bond me to you and when you make a
recommendation I’m trusting you as the
expert so I’m going to listen so your
clothes you’ve got a lot of the lot of
the great information here you just need
to tweak it and make it more personal
next this is start trading same thing
out fix octave a trade tomorrow getting
started a simple just this question of
the Penner so here we’re talking again
about the the systems this is great that
you have it you know the steps pictures
I love all that activate it would be
great to have something here about
contacting you you have any questions
the support like what if this doesn’t
work for me there’s a way to reach out
if it’s on Twitter or email I love that
you have this should I don’t know what
this is a filter contact us to send you
the filter I mean this great you have a
lead capture form here so people have a
way to write in your not just losing
everybody who can bounce but i think the
missing step here is first again talking
about why you picked this system and
then also having a way for people that
we tell to you and ask you questions if
they have about it and allow their
strategy same thing top top picture out
in order to make more money in a
strategy chart set up so I’m guessing is
a very technical system which is fine
when to stay out this is great so like
where does the strategy come from is
this your strategy our focus on strategy
is it true so tell me the results from
this tell me how you came up with this
show me students who’ve had success with
this right you put that on the board
before you get into the technical
details of how something works make me
feel that it’s important because
otherwise my eyes are going to gloss
over but if you tell me your story how
you come up with that you show me
students we’re having a lot of success
with it I’m much more likely to pay
attention I guess that’s the end of the
page so overall it’s a good start my
general thoughts again professional ish
could be made better with some of the
things we talked about make it more
personal make me feel something touch me
with your story you do that you’ll have
a much higher conversion rate you have
people wanting to share this website and
I’d also add some more information
beyond these three pages right so you
can have an about me page you could have
a blog some thought leadership content
like show me that you’re the expert that
you know what you’re talking about and
you’re having success with this show me
some of your trades whatever it is shows
something on going to make me say you
know what Clinton be that dude is the
forex king and I need to be following
him those are my thoughts for those are
you watching let me know you think leave
a comment underneath let me know what
your thoughts are about this website and
I’m sure Clinton would enjoy it as well
if you guys like this video thumbs up
below you can click on my face at the
upper right corner to subscribe to the
channel thank you guys so much I’ll see
you soon
you
from my fiverr gig where I look at a
website give some feedback today I’ve
got eight days up to do this I’m going
to do one for Clinton who’s got a
website called i TI de group com let’s
check it out see what it’s about and see
what can advice we can give so here’s
the website now I don’t know anything
about this going in just checking it out
my first thoughts are it looks clean it
looks pretty professional I’m looking at
the top here and you know I had an issue
just saying with the names of IT I de
group with I tied group I would split
this logo up a little bit I’m just
looking at kind of layout now let’s put
that logo up just easier to read I don’t
get the picture why we like this is this
is in your top that’s that’s huge space
right there and then it’s on the
watermark of your picture I definitely
swap that out and doesn’t look very
professional but the layout looks pretty
clean pretty easy to read so what is
this a website all about learn and earn
trade currency online so the picture
doesn’t do anything for me in terms of
learning about currency but let’s see
what’s this about welcome to aight aight
goop oh he’s so much easier right here
with the tide so the little I the
capital T capital G so much easier to
read them than this I tight as a service
provider emphasis on wealth creation to
invest in the foreign exchange market
forex we pride ourselves and helping
people achieve financial success through
trading so it goes on FX open aight
aight difference quote though no one can
go back and make a brand new start
anyone can start from now and make a
brand new ending that’s pretty good i
like that quote successful Carl’s action
three steps help you achieve your
financial goals partner with us today
and then web posting by so you’re asking
people to make a pretty important
decision right so there’s tons of forex
websites out there there’s tons of
different markets that go after why
should they choose you everybody else
now this this looks professional ish
again to make this better I
clean it up like this has to go unless
they’re paying you something but even
you know you don’t want that to be on
there and that that makes it look a
mature and again this at the top and the
captioning and even this picture what’s
missing here from either on a bigger
scale is who are you guys right like why
should I go with you over everybody else
give me something that shows the founder
right so who is this person in Clinton
Clinton where are you Clinton I want to
see your face I want to see the results
you’ve gotten I want to see testimonials
some people have gone through your
system and it’s worked that’s what I
want to see on here make me make me feel
like you are the right company to work
with like if I go with Clinton he’s the
man right i don’t get that here this is
that this is better than some pages out
there but it’s it’s a lot worse than
other pages and so you’re in a super
competitive market you have to do
something to stand out so overall that’s
that’s my first stomach I would not fill
this out yet because I don’t see any
social proof i don’t see people having
results from it and i don’t know about
who Clinton is and why she signed up for
this so right like so read this you know
ok the I tied group difference
everything you say here is something
that every other four arcs website is
going to talk about we’ve spent a lot of
time developing this material provide as
much value as possible and although it’s
only to put an iceberg right everybody
talks about this everybody so you need
to do something to stand out and the way
you do that is through your story
Clinton why did you start this what got
you into forex why is it working for you
and what pain did you see in the market
when you went out and created this
website there’s a reason for it right
why why do you want to educate people so
badly that’s that’s why I has to come
out that’s how people are going to come
and sign up with you over everybody else
because all the other guys are seeing
exactly the same thing so you can make
it look more professional a little bit
again it’s an okay job but still you’re
going to have a hard time I’m better not
a lot of people are filling this out yet
because you have to tell your store and
make me feel something about your brand
so those are my quick thoughts in a home
page it’s like a little bit what else we
have here we
got a Twitter page will load that up
we’ve got the fax starting training our
strategy so there’s nothing about us
which I would love to see I always look
to see who the person is and see a nice
smiling picture Clinton in his success
so here’s their twitter page so I guess
it’s pretty new you know only 41 tweets
but what I do like is it is being
updated right sometimes they go to
Twitter pages nothing there so at least
has been updated 21 hours ago we’re
posting some quotes some more buffets so
it’s on trend I’d love to see your face
here man you know make it’s called
Clinton be if that’s your last name be
you know have half your face make me
feel something you know people love
connecting with people that they see
your face and smiling and thats
everywhere that’s a part of the bread
people going to sign up right look
Warren Buffett it’s an individual people
love connecting with people to switch
this around I love that you’re writing
to people i know this conversation is
all about well it’s back and forth back
and forth it’s great like this is
awesome providing supports this guy’s
paul have some questions no clinton’s
responding this is great right so
imagine a Paul could interact with the
face here so you’re doing the right
thing so far our Twitter’s is great
you’re responding people you’re posting
quotes and some interesting information
look at all these at responses this is
great so back to the website these are
the three pages the fact start trading
our strategy again I change all of this
out take this off change the picture get
rid of this thing it doesn’t relate to
what you’re talking about here the font
is nice though the contents nice the
layout looks good you ask them some
questions again this could be so much
better if you made this personal so okay
let’s see what is forex Oh ideally this
is a link where take me right down to it
but let’s go to what is forex so for
example that this is you know these
questions again it’s going to be from
every single person who has a for art’s
website night what is forex what is a
pip what are the seven most commonly
traded currencies so I mean I can find
this everywhere
what’s going to make the big difference
is your take on it right how to trade
foreign exchange over the internet so so
you’re talking about metatrader4 I don’t
know anything anything about this right
meditative for FX open tell me why you
love this why is meta treated for the
best thing ever why is FX open your
favorite tool to use right tell me your
stories say tell me about the the other
forex systems reviews that sucked and
how cumbersome they were an expensive
and terrible service or whatever the
points are and say why you love working
with this because this is just Fox and
I’m getting lost in it it’s not making
me feel anything where if you came up
until I told your store and told me why
you picked metatrader4 why this is
important that I should care about it
then I’m going to be more interested and
that personal connection is going to
bond me to you and when you make a
recommendation I’m trusting you as the
expert so I’m going to listen so your
clothes you’ve got a lot of the lot of
the great information here you just need
to tweak it and make it more personal
next this is start trading same thing
out fix octave a trade tomorrow getting
started a simple just this question of
the Penner so here we’re talking again
about the the systems this is great that
you have it you know the steps pictures
I love all that activate it would be
great to have something here about
contacting you you have any questions
the support like what if this doesn’t
work for me there’s a way to reach out
if it’s on Twitter or email I love that
you have this should I don’t know what
this is a filter contact us to send you
the filter I mean this great you have a
lead capture form here so people have a
way to write in your not just losing
everybody who can bounce but i think the
missing step here is first again talking
about why you picked this system and
then also having a way for people that
we tell to you and ask you questions if
they have about it and allow their
strategy same thing top top picture out
in order to make more money in a
strategy chart set up so I’m guessing is
a very technical system which is fine
when to stay out this is great so like
where does the strategy come from is
this your strategy our focus on strategy
is it true so tell me the results from
this tell me how you came up with this
show me students who’ve had success with
this right you put that on the board
before you get into the technical
details of how something works make me
feel that it’s important because
otherwise my eyes are going to gloss
over but if you tell me your story how
you come up with that you show me
students we’re having a lot of success
with it I’m much more likely to pay
attention I guess that’s the end of the
page so overall it’s a good start my
general thoughts again professional ish
could be made better with some of the
things we talked about make it more
personal make me feel something touch me
with your story you do that you’ll have
a much higher conversion rate you have
people wanting to share this website and
I’d also add some more information
beyond these three pages right so you
can have an about me page you could have
a blog some thought leadership content
like show me that you’re the expert that
you know what you’re talking about and
you’re having success with this show me
some of your trades whatever it is shows
something on going to make me say you
know what Clinton be that dude is the
forex king and I need to be following
him those are my thoughts for those are
you watching let me know you think leave
a comment underneath let me know what
your thoughts are about this website and
I’m sure Clinton would enjoy it as well
if you guys like this video thumbs up
below you can click on my face at the
upper right corner to subscribe to the
channel thank you guys so much I’ll see
you soon
you
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